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Can A List Be A Story?

8/27/2014

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Into The Night by Dick Skeen is a fifty-five-word story from The World’s Shortest Stories compiled and edited by Steve Moss.

And It's essentially a list of nouns, adjectives, verbs, and adverbs.

But it's also a story.


Because Into The Night  can be said to respect the definition of story given by Moss that is, a story is only a story if it contains four key elements:

  1. The setting - an apartment;
  2. The characters - a couple having sex and the spouse of one of them;
  3. The conflict - the husband wanting to kill his wife's lover; and
  4. The resolution - the naked lover fleeing out the window to escape from the husband.

By narrating the playfully audacious Into The Night as a list, Dick Skeen gives an original and entertaining take on what would otherwise have been a cliché.

His skill lies in choosing the right words, in the right order, and in the right number, which is not as easy as it sounds, if your aim is to write a complete story in exactly fifty-five words.

Alberico Collina


INTO THE NIGHT

Look, smile, teeth, lips, voice, sexy, car, feel, apartment, couch, music, dance, lights, drink, moist, dry, soft, firm, fast, slow, easy, hard, leg, knee, thigh, shoulders, breast, fingers, silky, rough, breath, living room, bedroom, bathroom, kitchen, basement, bed, pillow, sheets, shower, cigarette, coffee, stockings, brassiere, dress, shirt, naked, rattle, door, husband, scramble, kill, clothes, window.

DICK SKEEN
from The World’s Shortest Stories, a collection of fifty-five word stories compiled and edited by Steve Moss.
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It Would Be A Sin Not To

8/27/2014

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The following fifty-five word story, At Confession by Harvey Stanbrough, is a favourite of mine. Although its setting and characters are readily apparent by the dialogue, this is no ordinary confession...

At Confession

by Harvey Stanbrough

"Bless me, Father, for I have sinned."
"How long since your last confession?"
"Two years."
"What's the trouble?"
"I have wished death on a man."
"You haven't acted on your wish?"
"Not yet."
"Who is the man?"
"He is cheating with my wife."
The priest paled. "I forgive you."
I shot him through the screen.
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The Ghosts In The Machine

8/27/2014

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In the following fifty-five word story an answer machine tells the story of the Johnson family, or what's left of it...

VOX POPULI

“Hello. You have reached 891-4207, the Johnson residence.

“Mary and Jim are not living here during their custody dispute. If you’re a creditor, please contact the U.S. Bankruptcy court.

“Mary’s analyst – when back from vacation - please call her at her mother’s.

To speak to Amy and Becky, press star.

“Have a great day.”

TOM FORD
from The World’s Shortest Stories, a collection of fifty-five word stories compiled and edited by Steve Moss.
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